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You have no idea by ~LightningFlash:iconLightningFlash:



Every time you look at me

You have to turn away

Because I知 not the one you want to see

You tell me I値l never understand

You have no idea

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For every tear you shed

I will cry one hundred

Each piece of your heart

Reflects a thousand of mine

You tell me that I知 lucky

You have no idea

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You mourn for a woman who is gone

I mourn for a man who is here

But not the man he was

You tell me that I値l never feel your pain

You have no idea

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You wish it had been you

I wish it had been me

Because then we壇 both be sure

That the one we love is safe

You tell me that I値l never know what sacrifice is

You have no idea

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You never hear me cry at night

But whenever I hear you

I know you値l never love me

You tell me that my heart is whole

You have no idea

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Your love for her is free

My love for you is in a cage

Who is better off?

I have no idea
©2005-2008 ~LightningFlash
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This was written as a Sparx/Ace/LI poem, but it's not fandom specific. A favourite of mine.

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~kitti-kate:iconkitti-kate: Jul 18, 2005, 8:59:07 PM
YAY! i loved it! total fav!

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iam worth $1,267,000 O.O wow
~angryamerican:iconangryamerican: Jul 18, 2005, 9:00:09 PM
wow! another side to the story of love! i really like this... =)

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if my life was a shirt this is what it would say...."i have animal magnitizim when i walk outside squirrels stick to my clothes" < this is actually on a shirt i saw somewhere and is so dam near the truth...except for the squirrel part haha
~Blackghost7:iconBlackghost7: Jul 18, 2005, 9:14:17 PM
...*speechless*

I am in awe of your poem, it is just that good.
~LightningFlash:iconLightningFlash: Jul 19, 2005, 12:45:42 AM
Thanks. Very much. :D

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~LightningFlash:iconLightningFlash: Jul 19, 2005, 12:47:04 AM
Thanks, glad you like it. :)

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~LightningFlash:iconLightningFlash: Jul 19, 2005, 12:50:38 AM
Thank you very muchly.

Indeed, love is a many sided thing. ;)

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~kitti-kate:iconkitti-kate: Jul 19, 2005, 10:07:23 AM
no prob

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~To See A World In A Grain Of Sand~
~And A Heaven In A Wild flower~
~Hold Infinity In The Palm Of Your Hand~
~And Eternity In An Hour~


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iam worth $1,267,000 O.O wow
~goddesstears:icongoddesstears: Jul 20, 2005, 8:15:08 PM
That's really good. I sucks at the poems and stuff. :XD:

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~LightningFlash:iconLightningFlash: Jul 24, 2005, 11:53:15 PM
Meh. You can draw. :P

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